Jon

Okay, i confess, it ... it was ... not me! Who did you give your number to on the site? ---Jon--- :D

In a flurry of pages Maybe you change flurry to something else, Blizzard sounds stronger and better here. And spaces blank; If the pages are flying around, it sounds odd ...

Have you tried to plan out each chaoter, or brainstorm? Those things should help. PM me if you have more questions.:D ---Jon--- :D

no! Its been months now, so I've given up hope. I miss him though. :cry: ---Jon--- :D

Anyone here?

Finally! *Steals kitty*, :cry: mine is, is gone! :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: ---Jon--- :D

Thankyou kyte! yes, the rhyme is supposed to be that way. I will try and rephrase the whole breeze/wind thing! Thankyou ---Jon--- :D

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- You look like a very happy person =). And are you from southern Asia? Like south-east? You look like it... June!

:smt010 that was really harsh! I don't like how you changed it, it doesn't sound right if you read it. sorry. Thanks for the review! ---Jon--- I mean you changed ...

it's not my poem (although I wish it was ), so maybe... so maybe you'll what? You better not copy this/print it! I know you wouldn't anyways. :D Thank you ...

Kitty15/heather

I loved the grandpa one the most!XD ---Jon--- :D

Dark is The Night Dark is the night, When the full moon rises. A single candlestick white, Burns, melts with lies. Wind howls outside, And death grows many. Trees crack ...

So your stuck huh? Whether writing prose or poetry, dandelions or daffodils, carrots or tomatoes you can always find your muse. (even if she may have died when you weren't ...

Instead of going crazy, why not write a poem about it? Although sad poems are very common among the angry, you should write powerful poems instead. Sad and depressing poems ...