Jon

I would appreciate Mechanics, Grammar, and flow tips/corrections. Anything is very much appreciated. Points will be donated to people who can help. Thank you. ---Jon--- :D ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Let's explore the ocean of our soul, I think it would sound better, and help with the flow if it was, "Let's explore the ocean's soul." I really liked this, ...

you gave me 300, Why not 700 more? It would make an even thousand ...

I'll clear up what I meant. Yes overEasy, something like that. Anyway, I meant how god can make you feel safe and can make you have good thoughts of something ...

Okay. *Is happy*

Hugh! (Congrats Snoink) XD you said I was Pure Awesomeness, So I, was the first. XD *Just thought I'd throw that out there* Really though, congrats Snoink, you are 'Pure ...

I wonder why it doesn't surprise me that this happened in New York. I don't want to argumentative here, but, not all New York people are like this. It's a ...

Thanks June and Slade!

you made my day too! I do agree with the scenery and that it needs to be more. Thank you so much!

Never to see a movie mre than once. Would you rather hurt someone you love or help someone you hate? ---Jon--- :D

Insane all the way! Insane people have some crazy ideas, If you know what i mean! Would you rather eat someone's tounge or eyeball. (While they are still alive!)

From space looking in, A perfect chiseled marble. Blue, green, and white, Well, that's how it used to be. The truth is, is that, Our planet is dying. The frozen ...

Banned for, wait..., um... ---Jon--- :D

God made the blind man see. God made the deaf man hear. God made the paralyzed walk. (so the bible says) With medicine, doctors have gave sight, hearing, and now ...

Isn't there a way you can cancel the subscription? maybe a phone number you can call? Good luck! ---Jon---