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And I said, " I must be dreaming. " You need dialogue marks around "I must be dreaming." Those eyes, that hair and his perfect smile. Comma after hair. ‘till ...

Let's make a list of who you guys think is the best of the best in these catagories: 1. Poetry 2. Fiction 3. Romance 4. Fantasy 5. Art 6. Reviews ...

Done adna, I liked it! Next?

Of course I will! First off, Gold Star ! epic failure, I find it is Epic Failure? :lol: For this poem, adna, that brings up so many thoughts and deeper ...

Emotions teem and tangle, crossing wires with buried - Maybe you could add 'crossing wires' to the second line? teem and tangle are good descriptive words but something isn't quite ...

Let me start off-----> :D Okay, This poem reminded me slightly of "Romeo and Juliet" actually, more than slightly. On to the reveiw: Two lives became one. This stops the ...

I can't quite make out what this book might be about. Maybe a place by the water? fiction? I live by vermillion actually! :lol: I really do. Magic Travels. ---Jon--- ...

For me, it doesn't matter. For people in my family, it does. I have a female cousin who is gay, well, lesbian if you want to get technical. I have ...

Snoink, we did something just like this in Chem. Carbon Hydroxide Edit -- Is it an interstitial metal? right side of the periodic table? Used in metal/structures.

The Way's aways away from tomorrow but we're a step closer today The Way's aways away from tomorrow but closer than yesterday The Way's aways away form forever but forever ...

Our lives are an inferno of choices, Burning hot with passion and hate. Not to say that life is black and white, But when you look, can you see more? ...

Thankyou so much Vox Nihli! You weren't annoying at all! :lol: I appreciate you taking the time to help me out with your comments. This poem was meant to say ...

The world keeps spinning you know, Not stopping for any single person. No riches can change that honey, All you can say is, “I have been.” You work for a ...

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Hey Heather! Seems like you have no reviews, I'll fix that. :D Scarce years before, I came this way, when infernos crunched the rubble rings Heather! I love this imagery, ...