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Re: Prologue: Here Comes Goodbye
Hey Tiff, It's Jon. :D She chucked the keys on the hallway table, and staggered into the living room. You make it seem as though she is drunk. I'm guessing ...
Jan 24, 2009 -
Re: free reviews all around
*Cough* Poem, everyone seems to like it... Please! *Feels guilty* ---Jon--- :D P.S. -- My, 'Review For Food' is open! :wink:
Jan 23, 2009 -
Re: Closing Guantanamo Bay?
they tried killing thousands of people. They did. Blink-- What I meant by they , is the people who planned it. The president let them go. I don't think that ...
Jan 23, 2009 -
Re: Prologue - Orilie Davis
Thank you so much. I agree on the plaid thing, I'll definitely change it! Thankyou, ---Jon--- :D
Jan 23, 2009 -
Re: My Beautiful Requiem
Leave me in my silent requiem, A peace that even trusted I. Leave me in this glass-cased gem, From here I see the passerby. I float like the dreams of ...
Jan 23, 2009 -
Re: Closing Guantanamo Bay?
Mostly everyone knows by know that President Barack Obama has closed Guantanamo Bay and let some of the prisoners go. I highly disagree with his decision to do that. He ...
Jan 23, 2009 -
Re: Prologue - Orilie Davis
Thank You! I'll definitely fix those things! Much appreciated, ---Jon--- :D
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: Mines
Hi Eimear, it's Jon. Let me just say, WOW. This was very good! I do have some suggestions though. :D and through this witching hour of half etherized sleep-- I ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: Prologue - Orilie Davis
Thankyou Kirsten! What are you talking about! That was a good critique, but, if you want to do a better one, go for it! :lol: Thankyou so much, I'm glad ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: Free Reviews. I love to review :lol:
Okay, That's absolutely fine! Take your time. ---Jon--- :D
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: Author and Character
June! Haha! I don't think here is anything to improve! I loved this. *Gold Star* I pictured the Character as the ginger bread man off of Shrek, I don't kow ...
Jan 21, 2009 -
Re: Untitled
Hey June! :D It was quiet . This line is EPIC no. XD Just kidding, Maybe you could say, "Silence lived in the air, no one dared breath." Maybe? Tension ...
Jan 21, 2009 -
Re: Free Reviews. I love to review :lol:
It's Realistic Fiction, I would really appreciate it! (only 900 or so words.) Entitled, 'Orilie Davis' - (Prolouge) Thankyou! :D :D ---Jon--- :D
Jan 21, 2009 -
Re: Critique Shop of Horrors
It's Realistic Fiction, I would really appreciate it! (only 900 or so words.) Entitled, 'Orilie Davis' - (Prolouge) Thankyou! :D :D ---Jon--- :D
Jan 21, 2009 -
Re: Reviews for the Writers' Soul
It's Realistic Fiction, I would really appreciate it! (only 900 or so words.) Entitled, 'Orilie Davis' - (Prolouge) Thankyou! :D :D ---Jon--- :D
Jan 21, 2009