Jon

Swooning strolls through meadow parks, Alleyways of mistful darks. In the wake of sister Mary, This her cross she is to carry. This is my favorite stanza of the whole ...

*Bows* Rosey Unicorn for going above and beyond to critique and greet. Also! For being the first to mention a certain name that rhymes with pawn. JON! :lol:

Inspired by BleedingRose ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Swooning strolls through meadow parks, Alleyways of mistful darks. In the wake of sister Mary, This her cross she is to carry. Nothing soon of fighting

Hey Becki! I have really nothing to say except you are lucky. You live in such a beautiful area. My favorite picture is the one of the big hill. I ...

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Oh, I've learned something new today! Archaic is it? Cool. That was a really good idea, sorry for not knowing and trying to change it. Well, if it's not a ...

You are going to critique it? That was a wonderful critique, I thought, but, if you want to do better... Thankyou so much!

Feed not on thy soul; For thy soul follows not convention. Render me with your colours And keep me near the wind. In the first line you should consider putting ...

it rubbed off on me from Jon. My name is Jon! Although, I'm not sarcastic. Anyway, Welcome to YWS! I'm sure you'll fit right in.

Thanks, it's a poem.

Thanks, it's a poem.

Thanks, it's a poem.

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I didn't want her to cry! But as long as it was a good cry. :D

Read this aloud to her. Swooning strolls through meadow parks, Alleyways of mistful darks. In the wake of sister Mary, This her cross she is to carry. Nothing soon of ...