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Done! They were both good! :D

Hi Sinnful! Jon here! I don't know why you would choose this tale to describe 'listless'. This tale is about a man who sees himself in a puddle/pool and falls ...

Hi Dudette! Jon here! grinning madly at the TV screen whenever their face appears on it. This is good, but, maybe you could add some more words in there. Like ...

Becki, you leave me speechless once again. Do you live in heaven? These pictures are so amazing, you are such a great photographer. My favorite is the very first one, ...

Yeah, I've forgotten too because it wasn't on the front screen. I think it should come back. :D

Wow, this is great. The rocks: I think the rocks could have been a little more realistic. Right now they just look like circles, really. Well, ovals. The sky: I ...

Hi, writing! I have to say that this had the best rhythm I've seen in a while. I love that. Anyway! Open the lock, think about, what would happen if ...

Hi, Play! I'm Jon. :D I have to say that I've never seen this style of format very often. (The long, spaced out lines). First I'm going to correct the ...

Hi, Mystymizer! I'm Jon. We keep falling backwards on all our regrets, Stepping around rotten petals of past (a past littered with deafened chords). I like this stanza for its ...

Wise Reviewing: -Cost nothing. -Can be anything. -If you like it, come back for more! - Guaranteed review in two days or your money back? Anyway, I've just became an ...

[s]*Prok: That wasn't very nice of you.*[/s] :? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Anyway! Onto the review. :D 1. I think the pearl earings would look a little better in black and white style. ...

It's nice to have you back! Can't wait to see some writing of yours. Welcome back. :wink:

Hi Music! I'm Jon Why can't anyone sing for joy anymore? Where have all their voices gone? I think the first line is just a tad too long. I would ...

Are you insane?

I know about my rhyme scheme, don't pick on it. :D (It's meant to be) ~~~~~~~~~ By this Hallow I compare thee, What life hath lived with immortality? The soul ...