Jon

Navita -- Thank you! I definitely see what you mean about the redundancy of "right now". Actually, I meant this to act asa conversation between two people - but only ...

Right now, you're a friend who happened to fall in love with me. Right now, I like someone else, even though it's complicated. Right now, he loves you. It's not ...

Thanks, Shepard! -Jon :D

Thankyou, guys! I tried to flesh it out some, make it more...more. ^_^ -Jon

I had the same feeling, Shepherd. ^^ I think I might add onto this.

Bald, baby bird dying - dead - I hear your sisters calling. featherless and naked - pure - you left us crying. The ridges of your feet clawed at the ...

Hey, Holly! Okay, you've got this little cozy piece of work that's almost like a story-tale...and so I'm going to help it get the most you can out of it...and ...

Let me first say that I love the flow in your starting lines! :D Take me back in time anemone, you could have been ambrosia, where I could have known ...

(I have a feeling like I've posted this before on YWS...but I can't find it; maybe it was a blog post of mine? Ah well) ~~~~ In the course of ...

I actually have a lot of experience with death...more than the average person. But, I've never done what was mentioned in the poem. Glad you liked it!

Wsto -- I meant that to be that way because the next is "Move"...it's supposed to make that jarring effect with the word "move". Haha, Glad you liked it. ^^

Street -- That's horrible! O: I'm sorry. :/

My hand has warmed since touching death - In night, in day, and all the rest. It lulls, it swoons, it makes you mad, it comes from the soul you ...

Haha, thank you, guys. :D The flow -- I know, I should tweak it a bit. Haha

Under my violet sky when summer's worked it's magic -- I'll be here in Wanton fields, running like a child in mid-December from the Chills of night -- - And ...