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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Consequences of Unforgivens

    Most refreshing piece of poetry I've read on here since I joined yesterday! I feel I have to really read to understand your piece, but then the reward of grasping ...

    Mar 8, 2012
  • Short Story » Realistic, Culture Re: Sunshine

    Incredibly emotive for such a short piece! A lot packed in there, and no words seem wasted. I like it a lot. I don't think I can even recommend any ...

    Mar 8, 2012
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: Burden

    This is super! The ending is particularly excellent. Leaves us a sneaking suspicion that she knew someone would catch her, and look after her. This feels like a pretty complex ...

    Mar 8, 2012


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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