Johnathan_Darc

** Is Cancer still open I read all old post and didn't see it, but I thought I should check and see if i can jump in... also Hera is ...

I like the premise of the story and the way that you painted it. The only real complaint i have is that there is some redundancy in it that slows ...

Chapter 1: The setup The room wasn’t large. You pay sixty dollars a night you at least want, no maybe not want maybe just expect, expect a room that you ...

Shuan: Shuan sat on the the trunk of the Jaguar that he had taken from Lombardi's house and looked at his phone. 8:36 am The battery light flashed at him, ...

Shuan: The expression on the boys faces was friendly, but still some how neutral. He extended his and to give Shuan the cover to his phone back. “Thanks,” Shuan said. ...

Shuan: Chank! The car jolted to a stop and a sickening feeling swept over Shuan like a cold wind as a piece of metal fell to the ground followed by ...

I really like the way that your words dance and flow through the piece. I think that it was to short for me but I loved it either way. It ...

I loved this It was fantastic!!!!! The one thing that I can add is that I would have like to see some pull of the fingers that dance on the ...

My words flow through my hands and into the machine things that give birth new words like pain, your timing is off. Here are the three things i should have ...

*** sorry I have been way busy so I am way late posting. And it isn't like my other post sorry but I will be back good as ever soon*** ...

*** sorry I have been way busy so I am way late posting. And it isn't like my other post sorry but I will be back good as ever soon*** ...

*** I guess i will stay a little longer... I don't know who shot Emily... no one that i know of, all so Carlie is next to (or was next ...

*****I am dropping... because this isn't making sense anymore***

Shuan: Shuan felt bad about what had happened, it was like some other part of him took over when he saw lombardi in trouble and he just couldn't stop himself. ...

Queen Mab: Her heels clicked against the hardwood floors of the old Victorian style home. Her thoughts were on the reports of what happened at the dance and her eyes ...