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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Funeral

    Hi there, I too have to write a creative piece for my english essay too next week!!! But I'm in a standard class and something tells me that your an ...

    Sep 9, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Ancient Travini

    Yeah I think so too ... but you reckon his a great drawer? I believe he does use great visual techniques, e.g. creating a deliberate reading path and vectors in ...

    Jun 15, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Quick Meal - Short Story

    Hi Laurence! For a spontaneous story it's pretty good and also I love the in-text referencing as well as it gives it creditability as it sounds like it actually does ...

    Jun 14, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Ancient Travini

    Hi Laurence, I don't know, do you believe this to be an insult or a positive portrayal of me?

    Jun 14, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Ancient Travini

    This piece was drawn by my best friend. The image is a representation of myself as a neanderthal, assuming because I have a lot of facial hair and also maybe ...

    Jun 13, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: Always Be There

    Hi Laurence! Thanks for taking the time to review my song and the overall positive comments you have made about it. To answer your question, yes the song is designed ...

    Jun 7, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: Always Be There

    Hi Leyah! Thanks for deconstructing my song for me, I appreciate it. Yes I didn't realise till you mentioned it that the first verse changes rhyme mid-verse. Like you said ...

    Jun 7, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Operation Frostbite: Death at Sea

    Inspired by the first level in the SOCOM game, hope you enjoy. By the way, please don't hesitate to be brutally honest if it's bad. Thanks. :D Monday, November 27th, ...

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: Always Be There

    Intro/Verse 1: You are my best friend and you have been there from the very start You’ve been there to guide me and everything you’ve done has came from the ...

    Jun 6, 2010


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