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Re: Weaving the Web of Fate (concept and prologue)
Prologue Welcome to Europe. An overcrowded, heavily polluted economic powerhouse, and major hub for incoming flows of goods and people from all over the world. Twenty-seven nations, hundreds of cultur
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: Towers Falling
A great story and a great way to remember the horror that 9/11 was. I like your approach of taking different people and outlining the impact the events of 9/11 ...
Sep 3, 2011 -
Re: Kill, or be killed
Amazing! The second and third chapters are even better than the first! There is a great build-up of tension and a lot of suspense. You write descriptive and the descriptions ...
Sep 3, 2011 -
Re: Hidden (Preview)
This is really good! It is so engaging, I was immediately hooked! Your writing is so vivid and real, as reader I could picture everything effortlessly. You have done a ...
Sep 3, 2011 -
Re: Hidden (Preview)
This is really good! It is so engaging, I was immediately hooked! Your writing is so vivid and real, as reader I could picture everything effortlessly. You have done a ...
Sep 3, 2011 -
Re: And whatever happened to May?
You have done a great job in making such a short story powerful and believable. I do agree with the above said, that it was a bit rushed and that ...
Sep 3, 2011 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Well, thank you for the compliment, Heather. I am very flattered. :D
Sep 2, 2011 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hey, Heather! I am from the Netherlands, so my first language is Dutch. I like writing in Dutch as well, but I must say I have more love for the ...
Sep 2, 2011 -
Re: Marked
Wow, I was really very impressed with the first chapter of your story! First of all, the setting is great. As science-fiction, your world is original and at the same ...
Sep 2, 2011 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hello, my name is John and I am new here as well! I love to write, both in my native language and in English. I am really looking forward to ...
Sep 1, 2011
