Johann

Hello MJTucker First of all, thank you very much for the review :) I truely appreciate you takeing the time to read my writing and I am glad you enjoyed ...

Don't worry Charley I didn't think it was rude :) I only wanted to explain so that no misunderstanding is left.

Yes Charley the narrator speaks to Carl. I don't know if it's funny or not, I'm usually not a funny guy so I don't think it is. Plus it was ...

Although this is just one word, I think that it could be used as a leit motif for a good story.

I also tried to edit the text here but for some reason it doesn't show me the text. Only the Title and Description.

Hello Lycando and Fakecow. First of all thank you very much for the reviews. I took in consideration your advice Lycando and change a bit the last but so that ...

Thank you for the review and for pointing out some of my typing errors. Last night we I posted my story I was very excited about it and forgot to ...

Guys, I'm really sorry for replying after some many months. The fact is that I have been caught whith some serios school problems and I couldn't do anything I ussually ...