JoeBookman

Woops, meant the rhyme scheme is abcb*

Hi Kostia. Thanks for your review. The poem is actually structured as abab with roughly seven beats per line. The second stanza has the (???) because I'm having trouble filling ...

Hello, apologies for the tardy response. I just realized I never followed up with any of the input on this poem. Thank you for pointing out the correct use of ...

Hi, I apologize for my tardy response. I appreciate your feedback and input! I'm glad you picked up on the multiple interpretations. If you were the narrator, which interpretation would ...

Hi there! I only just realized I never replied. I wanted to be sure to thank you for your feedback, and I agree with your comment on using "realm." This ...

Hi there! I only just realized I never replied. I wanted to be sure to thank you for your feedback, and I agree with your comment on using "realm." This ...

Hey, thanks for the review! I really appreciate it. I took your advice and reduced the initial setup up. This is also for an assignment in my CW class and ...

Absolutely. Just let me know. I always return a favor.

I'm so glad I got the chance to read your story. I'd love to do review tag with you. I'm a slow but steady kind of a writer, but I ...

Hi Mage, thanks for your review. I would agree that characters are the main focus of the story. They drive everything. I'm always interested to see how people perceive them. ...

As a side note, after reading your responses to the other reviews here, I want to say that I think your intro is well paced and you should keep it ...

Hi BlueAfrica, thank you so much for the review. The fight scene was very difficult to write and there's a lot of work to be done. Your input is helpful; ...