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Re: May the World Burn, Chapter One
Hey Misfit! okay so i haven't read anything else but the first chapter so you'll get an honest, unbiased opinion of the first impression of this story. Overall, I did ...
Dec 27, 2011 -
Re: Dear Sara~For 'Dear Somebody' Contest:)
Ah. May. Zing. 1) You utilized the second person voice very well and did a good job of making it very effective 2) You really capture the cliche irrational anger ...
Dec 19, 2011 -
Re: Return of the Gods #1: Artemis (Chapter 1)
Overview: Complements: I absolutely love the premise to this book. The combination of that eerie Utopian society mixed with Greek mythology is perfectly original. However: The whole chapter seems a ...
Dec 19, 2011