Jitterbug

Renn, I really enjoyed this first chapter! Your descriptions are well written and your characters are deeply drawn. And even though there are many similarities to X-Men, you give the ...

Renn, I was really intrigued by your interlude. Though I didn’t totally comprehend everything that was going on, that’s actually what made it all the more intriguing. I love stories ...

SP, you’re prologue is a good one. Without being too wordy, your descriptions are very detailed. You not only describe the Rage, but you make readers feel the Rage. Therefore, ...

Redbird, your novel is fantastic! And I’m not just talking about the plot, either. Your writing is nearly flawless. Your prose is clear and crisp, and instead of being overly ...

Seshat, your premise is interesting. I’m curious to know where these creatures known as Silhouettes come from, what their intentions are, and, namely, why they’re targeting the main protagonist. W

RachelJY, I really enjoyed your second chapter. It’s filled with Scriptural accuracy; yet, with your charming imagination, you bring the events to life in a real, personable way. We see ...

RachelJY, your opening narrative was powerful! It was written with the depth and authority that we see in the actual Scriptures. And it relates perfectly, in a gripping, soul-stirring way, ...

Forestqueen, having read your entire novel – not sure if you saw the review I posted – I think your alternate first chapter isn’t a bad idea. It tells of ...