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Yay! Thanks again, Bubbles, twas most helpful. Hehe, I love the 'Your face' thing, my friends always say it, hahaha. I do appreciate this, Bubbly. Cheers.

Haha Bubbles, I love you! ... Well Ok, maybe not love exactly, but this really did help. Hehe, yes I did have a diner-esque feel in mind, its good that ...

I'll introduce a more detailed description of the place in the next chapter and just for the record, I never said it was an army camp lol. More to come ...

Blast, so we're back to the whole giving meaning to the story? I understand what you're saying about improving the final impression DD, but I ... guess I'm struggling with ...

Revised!!

You know, funnily enough, I felt a little odd about that ending. In my head as I was writing the chapter, he would leave dejected... hmm, Ima have to make ...

Chapter 2: Recurrence. Kay paced. He stood outside the Council chambers at the centre of Keep, if it could even be called that. It was little more then a motley ...

Wow, thanks a bunch Jenna! Hahaha. I love that you read it to your little brother and he liked it! Woo! Kay...well, he's a violent man, can't help it now. ...

Yay, more comments. Thank you both for your commentingness. What was confusing about that part Adam? But yessum, cheers for the effort.

Ah, you've spotted the little typos and such, tricksy little hobbitses that got away from me. Thank you, kind lady! Tis appreciated.

I hate you. That was brilliant. And I'm not given to gushy reviews either. Unhelpful, I know, but I was truly impressed. was hijacked by a group of terrorists and ...

Chapter 1. Portents. Kay awoke, grimacing. His head pounded and he squeezed his eyes shut against the light that seemed to stab into his vulnerable flesh. He hawked roughly and ...

Fanfiction doesn't have to remain true to the story people! That's the whole point, taking it places the original didn't go. It doesn't matter anyway, I'm rearranging this so it ...

Its not really a beginning, so much as a fragment lol. I did think, as I was writing it, that I could make it a beginning and go from there, ...

Yes, my other works... are more me, I guess lol. This was a deliberate attempt to say as little as possible. Seems to have worked and p***ed of everyone in ...