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It was? Well, there you go. I try to stay away from Dan Brown, so no I haven't read his books. XD At least it wasn't completely stolen, haha, there ...

Heya, thanks for the comment and I'm glad you enjoyed it! Cheers

Ah! Will I never escape the video game stigma? Hopefully, considering this is the first time its ever been applied to me, so I should have time, haha. Only got ...

"Destinations set, goals achieved, candle-lights snuffed - periodic darkness. Thoughts drift, distance grows, problems multiply but even in the darkness, in the twilight, the work continues." Destinat

So the consensus is to get rid of them? Hm. If I stick with the Rome as the city-narrator, then I might keep them up until it all ties in ...

Ha! Ye gods, but you're quick, with the response. I like that about you. I freely admit to not being proficient within the first person style - this is, I ...

Oh! And I've been so glad to see my absentee foe, dancing about once more with Impish grace. What to say on the italics? I'm not really sure about them ...

Hey, Angel! I am feeling good, now that semester is over and my stress has been lifted a bit, so thank you very much for reading and critiquing! I intend ...

I have read her novels. All of them. I very much enjoyed the Black Magician trilogy and I own the series, although it is nowhere near the best, in my ...

Yay, some solid writing! It's been a while, but she has returned! Albeit with a short piece. Nicely done, Cal. You were a bit comma happy. but ultimately this was ...

Lol, Snoink, as if I could say - Well, I could give you a broad intimation of the goings-on thus far, but that would take me an age. The Historian ...

... Has anyone read this series?

Yeah, I'm in agreement with you on all those points. I really enjoyed the beginning too, it was a unique situation for a unique character but I couldn't just leave ...

Yeah, its not finished. Don't know why I started writing this, lol, it just came out of nowhere. But I submitted to my class at uni for work-shopping, so I ...

Thanks for the comments, all. I wanted to extend and change this a little bit, but I've run out of time in terms of the contest so I'll just have ...