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Re: nine lives & the lottery of dreams
#18 I want to take you out but can't imagine where you'd fit best -- chinatown is weird, I find the fortune cookie mysticism unnervingly accurate (I know you'll say ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: nine lives & the lottery of dreams
#17 She stands atop a cliff both white and grey, and remembers an age when she was not so old. Condensation drips down a face too worn to know it's ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: nine lives & the lottery of dreams
I appear to be in a morbid mood o.O #16 I think I'm addicted to grief, to the way it organises and prioritises life with methodical, grey fingers tipped black ...
Apr 16, 2011 -
Re: nine lives & the lottery of dreams
#15 murder, she wrote in spiral shaped sea shells on the beach one limp Sunday morning. waves crashed against it, a ceaseless foaming madness on the lips of the ocean ...
Apr 16, 2011 -
Re: nine lives & the lottery of dreams
Just a note: you may have already noticed, my output is winding down. It may just stop soon - I'm not happy with what I'm producing and I want to ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: nine lives & the lottery of dreams
#14 I remember nothing special about you, just wide spaced teeth and a smile that lit your eyes. I was only twelve, maybe less not old enough to realise later ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: Happy Fun Ball
Your last poem is far and away the best I've read so far in NaPo. Hell, it's one of my favourites regardless of NaPo --I don't read much poetry, usually. ...
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: nine lives & the lottery of dreams
^ Wanted to delete that, but Kammeh wouldn't let me. Gotta leave the crap alongside everything else, no? #13.1 the sky's pall is thick enough to cast doubt on the ...
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: nine lives & the lottery of dreams
Heh, thanks m'dear. *snugs Kammeh* #13 I wanted you to believe in something, anything, other than me; your persistence haunts my carefree steps into stuttering recoil and I beg you ...
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: NaPo Discussion 2011
I didn't mean I was using it to try and instil a routine whereby further poetry could be produced, but just writing in general, yeah - prose, actually. I'm no ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: Hide yo kids, hide yo wife (mustard NaPo)
A Response to Your Response to Others, And Also, To Your Work, And I guess to You, Too there's a chaos to your writing, a desperate overture, like some crazed ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: nine lives & the lottery of dreams
#12.1 Neither Here Nor There I danced with a cartographer, who couldn't measure the distance between my head and his heart so I resolved to chart it, shaky hands trailing ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: NaPo Discussion 2011
That's difficult to answer. I've certainly surprised myself given the volume - the amount! Over 30 in 12 days - I've produced in so short a time, but then, it ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: nine lives & the lottery of dreams
#12 Long Distance Call Listen, my voice hasn't reached you yet, it's in transit among the stars collecting dust more ancient than the sun. i hope it gets there in ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: Scramblings and Ramblings
*likes*
Apr 11, 2011
