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Ye gods, but I have to keep a rein on just what I'm writing and when. I have to say in reading this again, after your wonderful comments brought it ...

Ah! I totally forgot you were meant to look at this. I also forgot to mention that given the severe make over I have decided to give it (i.e turn ...

Aha! Yeah, that's what I was thinking of lol.

It was a publicity stunt. Absolutely shameless. :p

Your poems make me happy.

Oo-er. This piece has begun to feel familiar - I do believe I've read something similar to this before, perhaps the original you posted so long ago. Could … could ...

I’m standing in my mind[s], my brain, my head.[/s] I would cut the other two, as unnecessary. Also, it flows smoother without. Wait … what? Never mind. I wonder if ...

Indeed it does, Velvet. The idea behind this piece was to create a series of exchanges/monologues stripped of detail for ambiguities sake. Partly, it was because I wanted to see ...

Hey there, Velvet, Cheers for the message. Can I ask what you thought happened? I appreciate praise and criticism both, haha, This is nice, no doubt. Thanks again.

A/N: I'm most interested in the story you, the reader, can construct from these exchanges. ==================================== Hey, Haven’t heard from you in a while. What’s going on? How was the

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You haz stawry?! How exciting for us all, xD. So, small points of grammar have been picked at. I wonder at this opening, though - it's good, indeed, it has ...

Something with my name on it has nearly 50 stars?! That's cool, man. *promotes*

I'll take 'em.

Yeah, I'm with you guys. Just looking at the page before this and seeing Lord of the Rings , Moby Dick and Huckleberry Finn - three spectacular novels, with Moby ...