Jiggity

Yeah, I have room to flesh it out a bit now that I'm not constricted by a word count, so I'll probably add some of the details I left out, ...

Thank you both for the critiques (and June, who critiqued this story while YWS was down)! Jiggity -- Yep, he's an old man, and I don't know why you thought ...

Hey, Gryph, Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it. I'll get to those few questions you had next time, gotta run for now though! Just wanted to express my ...

Hello, there. I find it odd that you haven't read much fantasy in which there are detailed sword fights, that's quite strange. I think perhaps you should broaden your reading ...

Right, well. I didn't enjoy this, I'll say from the start. However, there are positives to take from this! Mostly, what I'm impressed with is that you've made (in my ...

Some people like to dream. I don’t. I sleep, safe in the comfort of oblivion. No traumatic visions to plague me, no lustful yearnings or fantasies to frustrate me, just ...

Hey Ky, you asked, and so I answer. On a general note, I haven't read The Elephant Boy - by the time I began seeing it pop up, it was ...

Ack! Why has this been dragged from the depths? It was a small, flash piece for a contest. Nothing of import that people should be wasting their time on, though ...

Haha, peanut butter is pretty great. Burgers pwn. You've certainly come to the right place for writing, improvement and just co-mingling with all the other struggling, dementedly determined would-be a

Aloha and welcome! I don't like sharing my writing with my family either, they seem to be aware of what I like doing and they tolerate it but its nothing ...

Welcome! I'm sure you'll make plenty of friends, this is a great place to meet like-minded peeps. Be sure to obey site rules, few and easy as they are I'm ...

Hey Ky, Been a while since I stopped by, but here I am once more. I enjoyed this latest offering, but it didn't really blow me away. Character-wise and setting-wise, ...

Welcome, one and all. ^

Oh wow. This is *so* bad. :shock:. Shocked i really enjoyed reading your story, it was bloody fantastic (for a 13yr old or otherwise). the idea of music-magic while not ...

Quirky and interesting. That's what I'm thinking. I really enjoyed this - you have the voice of the character down, comes across really vividly which is great. There are no ...