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Hey Ky, Ha, still on pregnant women, eh? Truly a topic worth much ruminating. I really liked this, but I do think that the middle deviation into random exterior description ...

Shazam. Sounds wicked.

Whoa, you have? Haha, cool. Right now I'm working on Shadow of the Sun ----or the retitled version anyway, 'Monster'

A measly 3573.

Hey WD, Thanks very much for taking the time to respond. I rather think you've misconstrued what was said, in a negative fashion. There was no ill intent behind the ...

Hey there, GJ, Cheers for commenting. I suppose I put in the explanation of magic because I didn't want - and personally dislike when I read such - too many ...

Orson Scott Card is pretty damn fantastic. Ender's Game is absurdly good and to Critiq - just so you know, pretty much everything in Science Fiction, is never, ever going ...

Well, I went back and separately italicised each sentence. Damn, but I'm pedantic and i hope you all appreciate it, haha. Cheers, Prok

Just quickly, all areas beginning with a date, followed by first person narration, should be in Italics. It appears to be working in the 'preview' section but not on the ...

The first fragment of...something...I'm not quite sure right now. ********* Summer, 1190, Year of the Drake I grow old. This is the troubling truth I have come to behold. And ...

I think opening it on weekends is probably the better of those options. Not that I would necessarily go for it myself. I'm not sure I agree on the community-front, ...

Well, yes they all die. The title should clear up any ambiguities in the text, I'd imagine, enough to say, clear any notion of each dog in question dying by ...

Mary whimpered. She nosed the ground, feeble whine slowly edging out of her throat. She scrabbled at the floor in desperation, unable to think, mind blank with the pain. It ...

I don't count this as a bug and this should potentially be in the Comments/Suggestions thread but I figure it's about the same and you'll look here first, so I ...

I'm at 6.75, ha. I definitely think 5:1 is too much and more than likely won't work. 3:1 is fine, shouldn't be too hard. 4 at a push. 5 is ...