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Haha, all good points. :)

Then I went and did this. I then ate a fish. And then my stomach hurt. Things like that. 99.99% of the time, "then" adds absolutely nothing to the sentence ...

Maybe this will speed people along to the nomination process - there haven't been very many! It needs a little more exposure, mayhaps? Where the forum is and such? Get ...

*can't stop laughing*

Yeah. I voted it be $999 a month. That way we mods could be paid and live an extravagant life of ease and luxury.

Mel, The author's views or religious belief are not in contention and are never up for critique. Fictional writing need never be a reflection of the writer's opinion. Review the ...

o.O Talk about an introduction! My god. That wasn't so much an intro as a whole book, your whole life story! Pretty cool though. CELTIC WOMAN LIKE OMG WTFBBQ. Yes. ...

^_^ Haha. Hey, Ky. So, we have another piece from you! Excitement. Well, once upon a time, yes? Now, not so much. Your writing is as fine as ever, Ky, ...

Hello again, I did indeed mention the hair in the last section. Also, no, it needn't be a comma after 'why'. It could be, certainly. But it's fine as is. ...

Uh, Hi Pen, thanks for your comment. I'm not sure you quite understood what was happening - or even saw the text as it is formatted - 'pickmeuppickmeuppickmeup' is already ...

Make sure to re-read the end of part 2! I added a bit that you kinda have to read to understand this. -- Ishmael stared at his grandfather. It was ...

Hey hey, guys, I added a little extra to this as I've been writing a fair bit today. Check it out before reading the next and final addition!

He's a master at coming up with and telling stories, ha - but not a great writer. His prose is generally rubbish. You just gotta put up with it.

Hey all, Thanks again for commenting. I don't mind that the journal entries are confusing and fragmented because they're coming from a confused, fragmented and unstable mind - that's a ...

Hey Envy, Thanks for your comments! All good points. This is, I should mention, a short story not a novel based on chapters or anything. I'm splitting it up into ...