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Ladydark wrote:....... remind me never to look at your work then, am simply trying to help, but obviously if I have over-done, then tell me not make fun of me ...

6/10- because im pissed about having contracted the bubonic plague. *mutters: stupid vindictive fairy* To River Girl: Now the plague was bad enough but insulting Stewie: thats...like...blasphemy! How

I also have Ettinodeg's Malady too, along with Corporeal Lieninitis, and Bordomitis. I think we have an epidemic on our hands. Its funny because were all diseased!!! hehehe.

I think we define ourselves. Regardless of what helped mould the eventual outcome ie society, ubringing, etc. I have nothing more to say.

Good, because your not getting it. 5/10--my lowest rating ever! mwahahahahaa.

Thanks for the suggestions y'all. Im pretty sure I'll be alrite as i am now going through a "depression phase", which should effectively quell my imagination for a while.

Cynical-itis: a tendency to be overly cynical or sarcastic. You may not know me well, but thats me in a nutshell. Not very exciting is it?

Geez, why dont you just re-write the whole damn thing! lol.

the fire roaring off to the left and exotic aromas floating about heavily in the stale air that should be: the fire roaring off to the left and exotic aromas ...

In case the last part was missed I will repeat it again: Feedback appreciated! Was it an appropriate prologue?, did it tell you enough about the nature of the story? ...

the story has been re-posted further on down the page. Scroll down and enjoy! :D

^ 6/10

I wont lie, Im not a fan of your av. However, due to your apparent love of Stewie (who i...like...worship!) I will give you 8.5/10.

I think it says fashion nugget...or some such majigy. Anyway: 8/10 coz i believe the woman shown plays Zoe in Firefly/Serenity and as a major fan of both i can ...

I am burdened with what I assume/hope all natural writers are, that is a much too overactive imagination. Every day new stories crowd into my head, some utter rubbish, others ...