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Re: Plagerism
Each story you post has a date above it like: posted at Tue Jan 10, 20006 12: 35am. So if someone uses it after that date (as previously mentioned) you ...
Jan 10, 2006 -
Re: Harry Potter 6 question (Huge Spoiler)
Sorry to say but that is utterly ridiculous. Dumbledore is not a horcrux (that doesnt make sense-how can he be a sliver of a soul) nor does he have any ...
Jan 10, 2006 -
Re: person above ya! #3
^thinks backgroundbob is a very funny critiquer ^is obviously deranged. good, yes. funny, no.
Jan 10, 2006 -
Re: The steps to Heaven
It could ptentially be depends on how well written it is and on the clarity i.e. how clear it is that certain parts are flashbacks. I cant really tell until ...
Jan 10, 2006 -
Re: Shaman-revised
Quote: There was a soundless explosion of light-blinding him-he couldn’t see anything! He cried out, but what emerged was not the frightened cry of a boy; instead the soft cry ...
Jan 10, 2006 -
Re: Harry Potter 6 question (Huge Spoiler)
I think Dumbledore really did die, and that further more it was deliberate and that it was necessary for the progression of the book. I believe J.K.Rowling was annoyed at ...
Jan 9, 2006 -
Re: The steps to Heaven
She’d jump out of her fancy car everyday with a smile on her face, wave at the car and wouldn’t stop until it disappeared from her view and ran straight ...
Jan 9, 2006 -
Re: Shaman-revised
PROLOGUE In an ordinary world, through an ordinary town, in which there was an ordinary street, there walked a…not so ordinary woman. Short in stature, she had a sturdy frame ...
Jan 9, 2006 -
Re: Books becoming obselete? It must be stopped!!!
Strange. I smell pages too. lol, and i completely agree about books demanding more respect. Despite this that idiot Dan B rown endorsed it, and as i said earlier he ...
Jan 9, 2006 -
Re: Shaman-revised
there to find a unique power handed down through her line since time immemorial I altered that a little, but Im not sure exactly what it is that was cliched ...
Jan 9, 2006 -
Re: On Matters of Spaghetti
Yeah, way to smash down our critique with sound reasoning. My complaint about the song was to do with the fact that the reader couldnt be sure about wether:“Noooooooooooow you ...
Jan 9, 2006 -
Re: The steps to Heaven
You'll have to wait a moment. Im currently writing the next part of my story Shaman. While I do that why dont you read the first installment of my story.
Jan 9, 2006 -
Re: Books becoming obselete? It must be stopped!!!
Let us not forget that writing is a profession as well a passion. People write for a living; they need the money so that steep price you mentioned is actually ...
Jan 9, 2006 -
Re: The steps to Heaven
Your right about it not seeming to belong in Fantasy...but I'll reserve judgement till the next installment. Otherwise it wasn't that badly written. It does need work though along with ...
Jan 9, 2006 -
Re: Books becoming obselete? It must be stopped!!!
I was reading the paper this morning (yes i read the paer; shut up) and I came across this article regarding an electronic device created by Sony called the e-book. ...
Jan 8, 2006
