Jiggity

Thanks a lot guys. Your encouragement helps me, and it will, I hope, only get better. The first half took me, all hour, an hour and a half maybe. The ...

[pre]Chapter 1.[/pre] [pre]He could smell the fear on the child, from his vantage point on the roof, as it walked down the alley. It was a heady smell...full of promise; ...

Thorontur~ The first dwarf died with surprising quickness, and all too suddenly the battle was joined. I stayed back, firing arrow after arrow, hitting more often then missing; saturating the ...

YOur story needed severe editing so I went ahead and did it; I hope you don't mind. Stop putting spaces before full stops and commas. [pre] The short fat goblin ...

Lmao. I like you Sgt. Salt, that was an amusing post! There are definite grammar problems though, snoink, you should fix that up.

I have yet to read American Gods but I sure am looking forward to it. Im also looking forward to reading the Sandman comic series. Ive been trying to get ...

Thorontur I nodded my head in thanks, and turned to ask the girl the same question, only to find her gone! "Where the bloody hell did she go!" I hissed, ...

~Thorontur Hearing the strange elf speak, nay, command me, made me furious. There was no time,howver, to put him in his place, instead i turned to him:"There is a large ...

There's a lot you could of done with the Kings betrayal; a lot of intrigue you could of woven. However you have odd course, thats for sure. I guess I'll ...

You know I had a whole critique summed up in my head...but everything I wanted to say has benn covered by fishr, so I'll just second what she said; it ...

Way to run off with the story, you two. Identify who you are, then beneath that place installment. ~Thorontur~ (im moving into first-person mode) I was utterly confused and as ...

~Thorontur~ He tensed, ready to spring and skewer who ever it was that had snapped that twig. His foolish endeavour, however, was halted by a most unprincely squeal as he ...

9/10- thats fuking hilarious!!! see I too am euphemistically challenged! Although I'll probably have to come back and edit this.

Yes, but I do not like the after-effects which include pneumonia, cathcing a cold, and the flu...all in one. TPBM is monkey shit.

Thats a shame. I really am strange.