Jiggity

Hey,thanks. Thats like the first error anyone has pointed out to me; cool. Glad you liked it. I'll keep going, I really enjoy writing this.

Chapter 2. He stood, silent and still, letting the night wash over him; concealing, caressing him with its velvety darkness. He didn’t like how things were turning out, he’d been ...

Well, this is certainly different. I like it, the whole idea of the story is very good. I will, however, say that the constant breaks and paragraphs get annoying. The ...

No it doesnt have to be human. An example would be the Wind in the Willows. It doesnt have to be some major form of travelling, for example a journey ...

A supplemetary text can be anything, as long as its relevant to the Area of Study, which in this instance is Physical Journey. I need to find three texts (text ...

That would be awesome...for me, not the horrified citizens. TPBM is a cartoon

Um, Ive changed it again, I got bored with the last one. 6/10-needs a change!

Plz, dont all rush to help me. No seriously, im drowning in offers of help.

I'll gladly critique this work...once its properly set out. Use the pre button properly. Every time you want a space or a break between sentences/paragraphs, highlight that part and click ...

Thanks a lot guys, I'll put the next part up as soon as possible.

ok, i changed my avatar, what do u think?

Needs to change?? Really?? *sighs* fine, I'll set about changing it. 6/10 for yours.

7/10

This was extremely well written and pardon me for saying so, wasted on Romance. You could do so much more and so much better than Romance. But anyway thats your ...

ITS URGENT PPL!!!!!