Jiggity

The house is perfect, lacquered wood shines with the contented inner glow that comes from being shaped by masterful hands, long, white and lovely. Each stone fits perfectly; the floor ...

Dark circles dot the cement, liverspots on the saggy skin of the road. Follow the living track, solidified in saliva, it creeps and crawls on to the trains and buses, ...

The old whore Esmeralde lies on the creaking bed, hips surging beneath the weight of the man grunting atop her; she notes carefully the pleading look in his eyes, the ...

Thanks guys! I'm using my mobile now, so excuse the formatting please. Will fix later ^^ There is little in life better than a simple walk in the dying light ...

The streets of this city have many faces, nocked and scarred and withered with age. The people are many, a milling stream of confused babble and hopeless direction; there is ...

Hello Mary, Welcome to YWS. :) You have quite a strange opening here, it's quite odd in tone and action - it's very description heavy, of things that have seemingly ...

Hm. You're right, I think. At least, I'm not sure - mostly because of the dancing piggy! It keeps distracting me! >.< Haha, yes I think this is way too ...

*peeks in* Hello again! Yeah, I came by once before to express my enjoyment in a very simple 'I like this' and was promptly overwhelmed by the obscenely long commentary ...

I'm supposed to lose myself, I'm sure of that, I guess I just don't know into what; you, perhaps? Are you enough to contain me, should I pour myself into ...

Argh, I am having so much trouble with this. Third chapter is killing me >.< I've written it several times now, each in which something different occurs. The reason I ...

Thanks! I agree with you about the first line. I'll take it out. Man, I'm two or three poems behind now. Must do some today! Cheers, all.

That is seriously awesome. I need to make one for my project NAOWZ. That is ridiculously cool and here I was thinking there was just a division happening between short ...

New chapters posted in Novel forums don't show up on the front page, at least as far as I can see. Is that always going to be the case?

A/N: Probably the last chapter I'll post for some time, definitely need some help. This was incredibly tricky to write and I'm not sure if it came off well.. --- ...

D: That's my favourite! Why take out 'of old'? I saw a plane the other day, just as I described, and it looked and sounded just like something from WWII...I ...