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Thanks a lot Crayon, all comments are ofcourse welcomed and appreciated. However, I know that this piece (which is unfinished) still needs to be "tightened" so I'll probably end up ...

*hits smaur on the head with a sledgehammer* I ment that the sentences would be difinitive and decisive if it weren't for the following "it had to be", "they had ...

I liked this short yet interesting piece. There were only a couple of things which I noticed: silohette You say this twice and it is misspelt both times. silhouette The ...

In this group there should be someone evil; someone be a villain. ********* ~Dirk Stone~ Dirk watched in growing horror as the Griffon pranced about, spouting slogans and making a ...

in one clean sweet. one clean sweep It was nicely written, Misty, well done. The first few paragraphs were the best methinks as was the insinuation that stacey didn't really ...

Um, why has Dq's character suddenly got brightly coloured green hair, when in his profile he clearly states that his charcter has Grey hair. I'll come back and add something ...

6/10 for the General's quote. That is all.

Dirk stood tall and defiant as the summer storm raged about him. He loved such weather; the raw pummeling of the primal elements made him feel alive as nothing else ...

Do we just post the fan fiction? Or do we create threads set in the various univeses that we all love- thereby making it so that anyone who had a ...

Oh deary deary dear. This is much too hard, I recognise the majority of the writers here, Ive read perhaps all of them. I cant bring out my list, it ...

*Shudders* I cant remember. -Shadow (Shadow) Ever wondered if there's a purpose to this existence?

Wow. I liked it, it was a bit long however. You should defintely think about spaces between dialogue, it seems messy otherwise. Also, spaces should be used for effect. eg. ...

Pipe down Adam. This was well written, bravo to you for some exceptional writing. However, it could be vastly improved. For instance you make reference to other worlds (which by ...

Mwahahahah. This should be a riot of fun...without an actual riot though. Despite my being swamped at school,( I have an assessment due on Friday fo Advance English, which I ...

That I will remember who I am. - Shadow (Shadow) What is your preferred weapon?