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*whistles*, that was some critique. I dont blame Misty for dying speechlessly. Nicely done Griffy. That affectively ends anything constructive one could say...its all been said. Misty now you can ...

Yeah, the whole "stay-at-home-and-do-your-thing" is a very appealing factor, but then again you have to be very good, with some published books, in order to be a full-time author. Otherwise, ...

That was extremely interesting and exceptionally well written. I mean, seriously there were very little errors, infact only one that I noticed. It was a little wordy, but on the ...

This has to do with my story, Shadow, of which there are many versions. The actual stories are generally the same. Only the first 2 paragraphs have been changed, so ...

Chapter 3 The soldiers stumbled about, having rapidly lost both the trail and their sense of direction while regaining a very sensible fear. They had lost the trail to the ...

Well. First of all, I generally like it. Kinda. Okay, so for the beginning I was like, so what? This is so ordinary, blah blah blah, then I thought, hey ...

Hahahahaaha. Lmao. I was laughing throughout that critique. Seriously, you make me laugh and funnily enough, I find myself liking you too. Strange, but hey thats life. Anyway, I want ...

Cool. Cheers ppl. I'll add on as soon as I can, Im all too busy lately. I wish I could just focus on my stories, but I cant at the ...

Indeed, there must be a group of villains to oppose the Wizard Guild. Villain Character : Vera Vocc Age : Unknown Height : 5'4'' Gender : Female Powers/Type : Necromancer: ...

Thanks a lot for these comments, keep em coming. All comments are helpful, but I'd like people to include in their posts, if its not too much to ask, wether ...

Indeed. I had one such encounter, I was so unprepared, I went into a sulky lil b**ch fit. Ha! I just had to remind myself not to care because I ...

LMAO. Lol, yeah I feel the same way. Interestingly enough, I actually started writing because I was bored, I had nothing else to do and I was sick of seeing ...

Yes, this was very well done. Quite good in fact, although I'll agree that the Victorian couple, ruined it. You could do so much more with this, but overall it ...

Well, happily enough, the convicted man escaped to Italy and will not suffer from persecution. I find these laws in Afghanistan ridiculous, its such an obvious contradictio to something that ...

I thought this was great, very nicely written. And I'll agree with Lynn on this, 'indefatigably' is a mouthful that stands out like a brazen tramp in a crowd of ...