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Not sure where this goes. *********** EDITED: the façade is crumbling revealing in truth, a mere mortal woman betrayed by the uncaring eyes of her son. tears I never knew ...

I'm writing this just for fun. This is the Prologue. ************* The Triplet Moons shone red and the very world cried out in agony, as her Oinkiness, Snoink, waged war ...

Okay then, your the first to mention that. Thanks though for the comment, tis always appreciated.

Um yeah. Okay, the one thing that bugged me was the prayer thing. Its unrealistic because it wouldnt happen the way you described it. They'd have to purify themselves before ...

Haha, lol. This is ofcourse, quite good. I must be missing something with the king Max not in with it, on that particular facet, but I still enjoyed this. The ...

Very descriptively written. I quite liked it. Although I have no idea how to tell you to improve it. Still it was very good, in my opinion at least.

Hehe. Oh well, the girl was as random as the story. Lol, thanks for the comments and praise ppl.

This is good, infact it's very good if considered as a fairytale, which is the way it comes off. A continued simplistic approach is nice, I think, and can be ...

Yes, thanks people. I fixed up that little "too quickly" thing earlier. But again, Cheers.

Thanks people. LOl, yes I can call bush a demon and fear not Im already in hiding.

This is the next part, enjoy. ******* As the bus took him to some unknown destination, he waited. He would be contacted soon; he merely had to wait patiently. The ...

It didnt stand out, in fact it seemed rather ordinary, as if you didnt put the energy into it.

Hey, this is quite good. If Im not wrong, then the title refers to the Valkeryi(sp?), and IO loved the ancient, mythical feeling of these words. Nicely done.

I enjoyed this...but I enjoyed the gushing comments even more. So, like Cassandra I initially thought that Friday was the day after and she was attending another party. I realised ...

A Funeral of Demons It was a bright and airy summer day, a typical day, one would think, for beach outings, gathering wildflowers, picnics and the like. It was not ...