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  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: With No Chances

    It grows, thick and spindly and not quite lush. It feeds, its depth casting planes and angles into sharp relief, depressions become gaping craters; I am haunted in its shadow. ...

    Apr 19, 2010
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: a fall into beauty - by angel

    Angel! YAY! You've returned!

    Apr 19, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Maharaj the Magician - 3

    Gorram that chapter two and it's boring school scenes! >.< How do I make that interesting if, well, I'm not interested? Hm. I think it needs to be destroyed. I ...

    Apr 18, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: FREAK

    Hm. Okay. Cool, well he's certainly the most interesting character thus far, it'll be interested to see him grow. I know about the frustration! I'm having the same thing with ...

    Apr 18, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: FREAK

    Yes, his behaviour definitely struck me as odd. So, I'm glad that *I* wasn't imagining that haha. Now, onwards and upwards, eh? The freak gasped. The walls were covered in ...

    Apr 18, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Maharaj the Magician - 3

    So, I had my monthly meeting with my project supervisor aaand...She liked it. I was really surprised. I went in there with my proverbial hat in hand, ready for a ...

    Apr 18, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Maharaj the Magician - 2 [edited]

    Thanks, Snoink. I just came by to look at this and it was all horribly formatted! Was it like that before? It had no spaces or anything. You should have ...

    Apr 18, 2010
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: With No Chances

    Modern spaces confine, walls close in, a messy whorl of confused utterances, looped and spun in a dozen different colours blurred into the same murky black. No place to raise ...

    Apr 18, 2010
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: With No Chances

    You duck your head with a playful smile, a quick flash of white, gone. And I want to cup your chin, lift it up - don't hide that fitful candle; ...

    Apr 17, 2010
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: With No Chances

    Okay, I rewrote one of my earlier crappy poems. It's still a touch simple and obvious, but not as much as before and thus the crappiness is a little less, ...

    Apr 17, 2010
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Navita's NaPo Poems

    Fighting Form - really, really enjoyed that. Nice and intimate and soft, very nice stuff. The only thing I would mention is, find another way to say the dog-eared corners ...

    Apr 17, 2010
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: With No Chances

    (Eek, I'm two behind!) ** Lying down in ruffled bedsheets, tossed by invisible storms, thoughts refusing to die, a persistant insistent buzz, buzz against the dark. You edge toward the ...

    Apr 17, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: FREAK

    Hola! I have to be quick, I'm in a rush, but overall this is much improved! She almost fell , b ut she had to keep moving. She had to ...

    Apr 16, 2010
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: With No Chances

    Um yeah, wow. That's pretty much exactly it, I was trying to mix it up a bit. And it was never meant to be prose! I'm sorry! Stupid phone lead ...

    Apr 15, 2010
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: With No Chances

    Wow, I didn't know my phone failed completely to format these >.< But, ah, they're sorta viewable now.

    Apr 14, 2010


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