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*lurks* but your words are falling and I am sitting in a grey room with tight yellow desks, reciting oxidation states as the clouds melt on the ground outside – ...

No worries, I get that too. I wasn't just referring to time - if the protagonist's viewpoint is disjointed, it's going to affect everything, not just time. But that's why ...

Ooookay. First off - you're awesome. Just to start off and thanks very much for the effort! :P So, yes, he wakes up clear-headed. As though the slate has been ...

Madness stalks me, with bated breath a shadow of a ghost I just can't track; run on, run on, run on - keep building a latticework of lies and half-truths, ...

I despise the normal school scene too, the first half of this chapter needs to be changed I agree. I didn't think of him as depressed though -- he snapped, ...

GO READ MAH STAWRY. You've already commented on chapter one. There are two others...help with either one would be good. I MAY EVEN BUY YOU SHOES IF YOU HALP ME. ...

I had no problem with it, guys, and filled it out as directed by the video. So maybe try going over the instructions one more time? EDIT: One thing I ...

You write ages? As in the ages of people? Or say, Ages of Empires? :P You don't like textspeak? You'll fit in just fine round here, haha. Welcome to YWS! ...

Hey hey! Welcome to YWS! Err, again. Properly, this time! With words. And, uh. Stuff. It'll be fun! Probably. :) If you have any problems, issues, questions or just want ...

And an eerie silence descended, but no one heard it coming. It came from the heavens, slipped through the holes in the sky, the burning lights we call stars. One ...

Lies! I am no poet. I actually fixed up that typo on Facebook (I've posted some there, lulz) and obviously forgot to do so here. I could write poems about ...

The dragon's raspy chuckle smokes through the air as puffs of warmth heat my skin in sweaty patches. It refuses to die; the glitter of its clickity-click scales has faded, ...

YAY SOMEONE IS STILL READING! Haha, I wondered if anyone would get the beard poem :P and I didn't want to put the title at the top because that would ...

Has the quality gone down massively or are people just ignoring this now? My poems are ronery :(

The moon pokes through the sky; the reaper's sickle grins down beside a mass of twilit blue riddled with the eyes of the dead. Walk on the sloping hills shaped ...