Jetpack

Hi! Here for a quick review. I think the idea is sweet and succint, so I won't deal with that. In fact, I'm glad someone directly addressed the idea that ...

Hi! Jet, here. This sounds like a blurb, rather than a prologue. Was it intended as the former rather than the latter? I only ask because it seems that you ...

Hey! You're quite new here, I see, so I guess this review comes with a Please Don't Take This Too Harshly disclaimer. I won't nitpick through this grammatically because it's ...

Hey, Firestalker. I've read the first half of this chapter and the reviews, so I hope I don't end up echoing what's been said before. I really enjoyed the story ...

Hi, Vasticity. This will be the first time I've ever posted in the Scripts forum, but I've been following this and the fact that it's been popping up on the ...

Hey, Classy. I'm not quite sure how this is going to turn into a novel without this piece being rendered a prologue, because though I rather like this style in ...

I've commented on this mainly because I actually liked the change in POV from second person to first person in this piece. I definitely wouldn't do it all the time, ...

Okay, I'll answer your two questions first. I have no idea what category this would come under, which I suppose is why it probably belongs in Other. It feels finished ...

Hey, BondGirl, I'm here for a review. I don't know if you really want nitpicks, but I'll start with those anyways, before talking about the piece itself. I’m afraid to ...

Hey again! Round Two it is. I've literally just finished with Chapter 1 so I can keep it in mind for this review, but I'll try not to nitpick as ...

Hey. Jet here to give you a review. I'll talk you through some paragraphs with nitpicks, I think, because though there aren't all that many and you've edited it, there's ...

My entire review just died. I was only halfway through, but still. I'll cut the introductions and get straight to reviewing this time around, I think. I mostly have nitpicks. ...

This wasn't exactly what I was expecting when I was flicking through Romantic Novels, but actually, it's very refreshing, if a little surprising at first. I really liked the style ...

I did a quick bit of googling after Rachael's comment and read the same news story. Even in that factual style, the whole story was quite disturbing; the simplicity of ...

I've read it through twice, and am still wholly confused as to what's going on here. Why did you choose to post this particular excerpt rather than start from the ...