JesusLvr18

I'd just like to tell anyone who's still reading this that I took the first chapter of The Someday List (which I renamed Finding Joy Fields since there were already ...

Aaaaaaawwwwweeeeeesosssoom mmeeee

I'll remind everyone again that this poem (and many other's of mine! curses!) is not laid out correctly. The site would not let me to any line breaks AT ALL, ...

I'll remind everyone again that this poem (and many other's of mine! curses!) is not laid out correctly. The site would not let me to any line breaks AT ALL, ...

I'll remind everyone again that this poem (and many other's of mine! curses!) is not laid out correctly. The site would not let me to any line breaks AT ALL, ...

Let me copy below which sections were my favorite: Learning about the world, in phases we hunger for another’s face. The bend of a river, digging deeply enough through the ...

alright! i've copied my favorite sections of your poem below: your truths expose shadows come alive to fright. rippling, it smothers my sense of what is right, squashed and smashed, ...

Maybe i'm not the right person to read your poem. Or maybe I am. I wasn't sure what the messege or point was that you were trying to convey. The ...

I love the last line (A lie has speed, but truth has endurance)! This poem made me look inside myself which is something that hasn't happened to me on YWS ...

This is getting old. Okay, my song didn't upload correctly... again..., so I'm posting the correct version below. Please read that instead. Trust Me [Verse One] Have you ever felt ...

This is very good! I'll do my signiture here and copy my favorite parts: [NURSE FELLOWS and ALIA are walking down a hospital hallway. Muffled sobs and screams echo around ...

Once again, the site displayed the poem wrong. So, once again, when you review, please review what I've posted below: Final Performance I put on a pretty good act. Thanks ...

Let me copy my favorite sections of the story: It's the same as always. Every night I flick the lighter and hold it to the edge of the page. Every ...

Since I've never experienced love, I only hope this poem is accurate! This was beautiful, simply beautiful! I hope when I fall in love someday, it's like this! You've made ...

I didn't really see the point you're trying to make in this poem. Your formatting was good, but I, personally, am not in love with this poem. I won't critique ...