JesusFreak900

Hi there! Firstly, thank you for the follow. Next, and most importantly, your poem. I love it because I feel like this fits me perfectly. I am always just content ...

I haven’t decided what Love’s all about But in my mind there isn’t one doubt That it is good for me And good for you too If you promise to ...

That was gorgeous! I was at total peace just reading it! I felt the coziness of the library and just wanted to snuggle up next to a fire and read ...

The story and the way it was written seemed very tight and concrete, which made it very easy to read and understand. Not to mention that it was just a ...

Well done! I enjoyed that bunches! The only thing that bothered me a little bit was some punctuation issues. Other than that, the flow was great! Also, the way you ...

This was a genuinely beautiful poem! Great job! A few things though... Some grammatical tweaks are defintely needed ("and wish a upon stars"). Also some punctuation issues here and there. ...

Very true. I really enjoyed the poem itself, but I feel like it didn't really have a full handle on the true feeling of fear. That moment of panic that ...

I feel violated.... But in all seriousness this was a very well written story that was well put together. I literally gasped at the last scene with the father. Ughhh... ...

That was insanely fantastic... I am seriously really impressed with this brief snippet of story you have here. The atmosphere that you created is so real and ominous. I liked ...

The ash The flames The hate The blame Still resonates With pain In our minds In our souls To this day This tragic day But we can’t hold on forever ...

My eyes were glued to this story until the very lasy word. It made me feel sadness for the boys in the backseat. Also, the sense of urgency that you ...

That was really beautiful in a gruesome sort of way. I loved your way of making Death sound like a character. Or was that purposeful? Either way, I also liked ...

Wow! From the first description of blood pouring down his face, you had me hooked! The simple, yet brutal depiction of this scene was near flawless. You were so detailed ...

Gorgeous in a simple kind-of-way. The rhyme scheme flowed beautifully and made me almost want to sing it. Please continue writing these gorgeous poems!

Firstly, I am extremely impressed with your writing style, if not just for the fact that you are thirteen years old. Clever title, it was the very first place my ...