Jester

This was very well written. Short and sweet. Your writing is nearly flawless in terms of grammar, and your style does an excellent job to set the stage with a ...

Again, Shina, another great piece. Before I go off serenading you with compliments on your writing just yet, I'm going to tackle grammar. Grammar Corrections Maybe if my existence were ...

A great piece of writing you have there. Let it be noted that it is grammatically sound. That is priceless within itself. I can comment on the substance of the ...

Shina, is it? Well, that's what I'll be calling you now. Anyway, let's point out that I just eat up your writing like buttered toast. It's delightful, and I can't ...

Grammar Patrol You cannot keep a culture private, individual, or traditional without first betraying society’s most important needs (in terms of advancement and long-term survival ): ingenuity and d

This was an entertaining story. It illustrated an interesting constrast between species (vampire and human) and fleshed out the jealousy factor involved with it. There were a a good many ...

I enjoyed it. I thought it was well-written and delivered an interesting perspective from a parent who faces a challenging dichotomy. Before I highlight some of the things I really ...

This is brilliant. I have very little to say but good things. Firstly, I appreciated the simplicity and succinctness of your story. It flowed and transitioned very well, I never ...

They are both some of the best fantasy novels to date, but if I had to choose, I would pick The Lord of the Rings because I am extremely fascinated ...