JessyAnnie

Hey this was a good poem. I really liked it, but just at the end i think instead of When you arrive, If you arrive It should say When you ...

Hey just started writing this story. Does not have a title yet feel free to make any suggestions. Thanks. Just two more weeks and I’ll be able to drive myself ...

Prolouge I remember once lying on a sun-drenched hillside covered with twisted Gum trees and beautiful little white and yellow flowers, watching the immaculately blue river that filled my heart ...

I really love this story!!!!! i have read all of the chapters. Good work. Plaease PM me when you have got another chapter up.

Staring out the window Waiting for the end When does the bell ring So you can go see your friends. Playing on the quad The ball bounces off the end ...

Wow good job You could tell you really were feeling this. Great work. :elephant:

Potions all around, Spells and enchantments, Are their only sounds. Hiding in the woods Where no sane person goes, They just can't wait, To turn you into a toad. Skulking ...

MIST Hanging over valleys Clinging to the trees. Hiding this great land From viewers Like you and me. A blanket blowing in the wind Rising and falling. A white sea ...

As I sat on the front step of my house, the wind gently ruffling my hair, I had the same thought that I had been having for the last year, ...

Life is like a wild open ocean Wild in the extreme The wind whipping up Neither here nor there Rough and unknown The ocean is unpredictable Like a big huge ...

Hey thanks for reviewing. I don't really like the part where i flash back either, so ill take it out and continue in the direction that i was heading in ...

This is really good. From the very beginning you capture the audience's attention, by starting at the climax. Just a little thing. At the end when the main character gets ...

Hey I really liked this. Keep up the good work!

I remember once lying on a sun-drenched hillside covered with twisted Gum trees and beautiful little white and yellow flowers, watching the immaculately blue river that filled my heart with ...