Jessey

Wow. That was really touching. I almost teared up. Like Herzing said It is people like you that change the world. Thank you so much. I hope every thing goes ...

Hey. It was really good and intriguing. It was a little confusing though as to what they were typing or thinking. Good luck and keep writing! :) Jessey

ooh that was good! keep going. A little bit of description would help the visual effect. ~Jessey

I thought it was pretty good. You could give a little description to maybe the weapons or the characters.