Jesiica

Thank you for your honesty, I appreciate it. I mostly understand what you're getting at. I'll have a look at it, play with a couple of different angles etc. and ...

thank you so so so so much for your help :) I really appreciate it. I actually completely forgot about this story however I have now made some massive changes ...

Thank you (: fhwdf. It means a lot that you would take time of your own to help me improve my story. Again I have taken on board what you've ...

Job well done indeed. Do continue. It's an incredibly good start - looking forward to seeing more from you.