Jericho

《 The city shines brightest in the absence of stars. 》

Without knowing the idea itself, it sounds vaguely fantasy, perhaps some sort of high fantasy or alternate-world; not my cup of tea personally, but something I might look into should ...

It makes me think that this story might be something about, perhaps, the importance of water in a society as a central conflict. Or perhaps water is used as a ...

6/10. It's decent, but it has too much heavy-handed foreshadowing. It would stand much better on its own and be much stronger if you just left it at "The wind ...