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  • Writing Activities Re: Post Your Favorite Lines

    《 The city shines brightest in the absence of stars. 》

    Nov 6, 2018
  • Writers Corner Re: Blue Arrows

    This sounds intriguing. May I ask, are the names of the main characters tied to any sort of elemental magic or personality trait thereof? Meaningful names are something I do ...

    May 11, 2018
  • Writers Corner Re: What Novel Ideas!

    @StellaThomas, I don't currently have any of the new draft posted, but I believe the old draft should still be visible on my portfolio here. It's nothing similar except - ...

    May 11, 2018
  • Writing Activities Re: Title Feedback [2]

    Without knowing the idea itself, it sounds vaguely fantasy, perhaps some sort of high fantasy or alternate-world; not my cup of tea personally, but something I might look into should ...

    May 11, 2018
  • Writers Corner Re: What Novel Ideas!

    I'm planning a rewrite of an old draft of mine - previously titled In the Absence of Stars , now, much more simply, Starless . The premise: Seven has ambitions ...

    May 11, 2018
  • Writing Activities Re: Title Feedback

    It makes me think that this story might be something about, perhaps, the importance of water in a society as a central conflict. Or perhaps water is used as a ...

    May 27, 2016
  • WRFF Archive Re: Jericho's Review Plaza

    Or, you know, something like that. Pardon my formatting; I'm not an aesthetic genius. I figured since I've been requesting from this forum for the last few days, I should ...

    Dec 22, 2015
  • WRFF Archive Re: Audrey Hepburn Will Review for You

    Ah, hello! I was wondering if it would be any trouble to request a review on Thank you very much in advance!

    Dec 21, 2015
  • WRFF Archive Re: I'll Review For You!

    Title: In the Absence of Stars (I would especially appreciate reviews on Genre: Speculative fiction, futuristic, utopia/dystopia. Type of Work: Novel/chapter. Length: Each chapter section is between 1

    Dec 17, 2015
  • WRFF Archive Re: Novel Reviews

    Ah, hello. I saw you mentioned you would keep up with novels... As you've already reviewed Chapter 1.1 of this novel, would it be any trouble to request a review ...

    Dec 17, 2015
  • Writing Activities Re: Rate the first sentence above you

    6/10. It's decent, but it has too much heavy-handed foreshadowing. It would stand much better on its own and be much stronger if you just left it at "The wind ...

    Jul 8, 2015


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