Jenthura

Well, first of all, I must say that both of these works are exceptional. They obviously took a lot of effort and time, so I'm not going to cast my ...

Notice how her face is dark, her hands are white and her legs are middlish? You need to work on keeping a consistent weight of darkness. That's all I found ...

Excellent work, Kittengirl! The first was good: nice colors, perfect focus, non-clichéd subject matter; all that jazz. Bottom line: it was good. Not great, but good. I must say the ...

Thanks for your comments and advice guys! tydecker - How exactly was it "really pretty" yet "at the same time it's not"? Was it the thick neck? I'll have to ...

Before you read anything else, be sure to read this: The lineart is not mine. I used it by permission from the original artist, karinasuperkul , on DeviantArt.com. This is ...

Ahah! I recognize the dark leaf and flower brushes! :D Anywho, you're doing great, but the lineart seems to be lacking in the guy character. The hair is excellent though, ...

Like Pink said, I think the guy really detracts from the picture. However, I think you should cut him and the other person out completely. Like this:

Unfortunately, I don't like this piece as much as your others. Let me explain why. The lighting on the hair is point one. You have one circle of light on ...

The B&W one of the two men in bowler hats was perfect. Definitely my favorite. The one directly after that (the one with the numbered guy and the horse) seems ...

Well, I'm pretty sure you didn't just make a drawing on top of the picture, since you have some mild differences with the picture -enough to tell me you didn't ...

I was confused by the surrealism of the first, and the second and third ones seemed (to me) that they would have been better left untouched. The fourth one is ...

Thanks Lava, the parchmenty backgrounds are those stock images I said I used. Stock images are resources for art that many DA users put out to help others with their ...

Ah, I forgot to mention that I used stock images and brushes from DA users. I'll need to credit them soon...

True, the horns are confusing. However, it's fixable. Shade darker under the horns, so that we can see that they're apart from the head and not flush with it. Anyways, ...

Yeah, so...whaddya think? Half an hour with GIMP.