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Jenthura

  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Breaking Free

    Nice work! I like the energy in the opening scene, and the way you introduced the characters. Nicely done, but not done completely yet. Here are a few pointers. I ...

    Oct 7, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Forbidden

    I think that, due to the way this story came to be, there was not much room for putting a background in. I suppose that's why you edit afterwards. :P ...

    Oct 5, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: YWS Screencaps

    Ha, 333 is half evil. :P

    Oct 4, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Mindless fluff.

    Well, it's a fairly nice ramble of descriptive prose, but I think you should Google 'purple prose' and read a Wikipedia article on it. What I mean to say is ...

    Oct 4, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Forbidden

    This is a short work built from random story-starting cards in the Writers' Toolbox (Google it).I got these three cards, and changed the last one rather dramatically. Tear me apart! ...

    Oct 4, 2011
  • Writers Corner Re: The Protagonist as a Villain and a Hero

    I suppose you could try 'Anti-hero' on Wikipedia. Wikipedia FTW, lol.

    Sep 30, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Just some stuff I drew...

    The final piece was undoubtedly your best work of art. I applaud your usage of the glaring bright green and the near-identical eyes. The wide-open mouth seems to point to ...

    Sep 23, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Rabbit Jake

    Well, well, quite a funny story. Just what is the meaning of it though? At first I thought it was a comical story, but somehow the ending intrigued me and ...

    Sep 22, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: in the face of filial piety

    This poem stuck out to me because the phrase 'filial piety' happens to be part of a quote from one of my favorite films. All that really links to the ...

    Sep 22, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A Hand to Hold - A 7/7 memorial

    I liked what you wrote for the quickness of it, but what was with all the stuttering? It really slowed the pace down a few notches. I thought quite a ...

    Sep 22, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The search for Partiling Pyrimid

    Z, the nitpicks seem to be gone by now, but there's something I wanted to point out. Dialogue. That means speech, talking, any sort of noise from the characters to ...

    Sep 4, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Nostalgia

    Polaroid? Is that the one that prints out instantly? I wanna get one someday! :D So, these pictures are all focused on the lens itself it seems, since I can ...

    Sep 4, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: a taste of my photography

    Okay, it's much, much too large. There are threads on the Art forum explaining exactly how to resize any image with pretty much any program. Check them out. Not that ...

    Sep 4, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Digital Shizz

    Thanks for the comments and advice guys! @Kagi I had trouble with the trees, and yes, I liked the real version more than the digital one. I guess I haven't ...

    Aug 29, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Digital Shizz

    I got my tablet nearly two months ago (or was it three?) and I haven't posted any digital art yet. Hck, I haven't posted any art in quit a while. ...

    Aug 27, 2011


Sometimes my life just sounds like surrealistic fiction being sold on clearance at the book store.
— J. G. Hammersmith