Jenthura

Unfortunately, by the time they figured that out, the Monster had woken up and was pleased to find a small snack between his paws.

@Abi, yeah, it's confusing if you can't see it very well, too bad I can't upload BMP images. >< @Yuri, Thanks! @TIGER, I've heard of Zelda, but never really understood ...

In that case, why did you post it in Sci-fi? Just curious.

I've hard this sort of art called by various names, but pixel art was what appealed to me the most, so I used that title. All of this was done ...

Granted, but then the new kid eats up all her time and she retires. I wish I could slap the authors of books I hate, just because I don't think ...

And so now I'm stuck here writing this, And please don't tell them what I'm about to say, Fancy imagery and fresh phrases are something I desperately miss kiss . ...

Granted, but you then have to stay away from any and all schools forever and then you have to be homeschooled ( not fun, believe me) I wish I wasn't ...

Hey there! I think you intended this to be something like an advertisement from the future. However, you had only the advertisement, and really nothing else. My suggestion is that ...

Alright, because this is so totally weird and unprecedented, I’m going to have to respond in a totally weird and unprecedented way. Let me break it down to some basic ...

Changing World Once your arm falls off, it’s not hard to figure out that the day is going to go way downhill. This opening sentence is brilliant. It’s got just ...

Hey, Redleaf! This short short piece is good in that the idea is clear and unspoiled, but you make a few mistakes here and there. A writer's serendipity: we think ...

Hi, jenth here Hmm, Leah refers here Mum, so I'm guessing that she's related to the dead guy. However, she's clearly unperturbed at his death and the 'halo of blood' ...

Granted, but to achieve such a thing, you have to drink a horribly bitter and disgustingly greenish potion. I wish my avatar would freak everybody out.

Unfortunately, it fell asleep right across the door of the magic Crystal room it was supposed to be guarding.

Woah. You actually took the story-maker seriously. I mean, given that particular sentence, I would have made him turn into a penguin metaphorically , Y'no? :D Anyways, it has a ...