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Re: Unfortunately; Fortunately
Fortunately, the Easter Rat's(tm) poison doses were proportional to rats, and thus harmless to humans.
Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish 2
Granted, but then you wear all of them at the same time (for some reason known only to your strange self) and snap your spinal cord in three places. I ...
Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: ZLYF News 001
Hmm, if you wanted to do a Star Wars-Star Trek mix reported as news, then you should have written it like real news. Also, the news anchor (the guy talking) ...
Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: 27 - Chapter Five
It'll be a long time yet, maybe next year when I'm not so busy.
Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: Pencil work - workin' on it
These are some drawings I did with reference photos. You can see that, even with photos, I do a rather bad job of it. Whatever, I think you guys can ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: The Tears of Battle
I’ve actually read another story on YWS about this. True the story was set in WWII and the girl dies in the end, but the resemblance is too much for ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: The Four O' Clock Shift II
Well done! Except for that one line, "First things first, let's put the kettle on and have a cup of tea." It just sounds...crazy. I know the rest of the ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: NaNoWriMo Calendar
Lol, you did this yourself, or was it official Nano stuff? If it's your own work, I suggest you tell the Nano guys about it, they may put it on ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: Morphia Chapter Two
There's tons of levels and each may take a year or two, depending on if you compete well and stay alive. The whole theme of the game is that each ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: Jinxx (working title)
Why is the first paragraph bolded? It doesn’t stay consistent with the rest of the story, since this ‘running’ part seems to be from the cat’s point of view, and ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: Campfire story
Hey there, Z, here to review as promised! I’ll be a little harsh, but you can take that, right? The dark column slowly rose from the forest, casting a shadow ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: Ban The User Above You! [5]
Banned for being mixed up, although you've probably already been banned for that reason before.
Oct 6, 2010 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish 2
A wish!
Oct 6, 2010 -
Re: "Your Story is About..."
These are pictures of Gen, The New Gen and the New-Old Gen.
Oct 3, 2010 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish 2
(LOL, I do this too!) Granted, but now forget worse things, like forgetting to put your hands on the handlebars when riding a bike. I wish I had all the ...
Oct 3, 2010
