Jenthura

Good, good, but I think you should use a ruler in some places. You're doing pencil now, but I suggest you go over it with a dark pen and then ...

First off, I hate to be your Mr. Raincloud, but 100-200 pts on YWS is *cough* nothing. Sorry XD. About the drawing though...amazing. Did you use charcoal? Because the...black stuff ...

Amazing work! Especially the salesperson in that window thing, don't ask me why, but she looks better than the children sitting down (maybe because the one on the left has ...

Fortunately, he gets his butt kicked by Chuck Norris and the day is saved. (Yeah, I'm bringing in the Norris factor!)

Banned for making me wonder why not very many people like this strange "Bolt"

Granted, but the play is changed at the last minute, and the lead role is killed off. I wish these bugs would go and bother somebody else.

Granted, but they posted inappropriate material and the whole thread is locked. I wish I didn't have to go to bed.

Banned for not grabbing it as it went past.

Thanks for the critiques! @Emmy: the teeth actually stick out in the picture and it looks okay, but when I did it that way in the drawing, it looked horrible. ...

Face shining with sweat and arms trembling, you hold me. Reading it, “Face shining with sweat and arms…” just sounds as though her face is shining with arms. Kinda hard ...

Both of the above banned for thinking that size matters in either direction.

You wish your wish, but the wish turns out to be the one thing you would wish you hadn't wished after wishing it. I wish for a thousand pounds of ...

Unfortunately, what did exist was a massive supercomputer that wanted to turn them all into rat-chow.

Sci-fi flash fiction dialogue! “If I ever want something done I have to perform a skirmvas before Our Lord the King.” “What’s that?” “A special ceremonial dance requiring the perfect ...

Banned for having a confusing whatever-it-is-you-call-that-side-thing-with-the-avatar-age-and-whatever because I was about to call you older but then I realized I was looking at your reviews and not y