Jenthura

Interesting. I'm wondering, will dolls replace human models some day? You've got to admit it, these dolls outshine any human any day as a model. That aside, though, it was ...

Recently, the smiley bar was replaced by a reviewer's checklist. I was okay with this. However, something else happened around that time. Below the small smiley bar, there is a ...

Hey, is this finished? It's seems very pointless at the end, but you built it up so well! It was very funny before the last paragraph, even though you did ...

Ha! The moment I opened this, I knew you wouldn't get my name in it. :D *feels very pleased...for some strange reason*

"Fourth, if your submission is accepted, we lack the financial means to pay you. However, you will get a free copy of the literary journal." Will this copy be a ...

First off, preview will cut the photos, but when you actually submit it, it'll end up alright. Secondly, if it's that big it should be resized. Thirdly, scanner? ;) Fourthly, ...

Very strange... I'm not into poetry, so I won't try to review at all. (Prolly should'a said "can't review") Suffice to say, though, that I liked it!

Hey! I put it as an attachment because I didn't want to mess up the highlighters. Bbcode, Y'no?

Well, I never met a comeback YWS'er, so this really isn't a normal welcome. Welcome back! Despite being a backslidden and unfaithful child, we just might let you come within ...

Unfortunately, the massive stone that had once closed over Merlin rose up and battled the Harry-wizard co. without even breaking into sweat.

Ha! I get to get back at you, WP! You forgot to make a wish! IN Yaw FACE! I wish I wasn't so super-blindingly awesome that I cause my friends ...

Your action was very well done, and you got the whole back-story somewhat in place. It’s a rather clichéd story, but you did a decent job of it. Overall, nicely ...

Jalmoc, your speaking ‘voice’ is weak and choppy. You described action in few sentences as simple facts, stating them and moving on. What you should really do is linger over ...

My goodness, three-two days of work and you only got one review? You definitely deserved more than that. I'm going to download this and read it overnight, I'll maybe have ...

"My consciousness kicks in and I am aware." I'm pretty embaressed of this one because I actually wrote it recently. Hate it now, though.