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  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Crux - Edited

    Thanks Rae! I tried to cut down a lot of words with the edit, but obviously not enough. Originally, the ending was going to be, "Slowly they turned away, shedding ...

    Dec 18, 2010
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Unfortunately; Fortunately

    Unfortunately, Lex Luthor knew how to make more.

    Dec 16, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: I Need The Noise (Working Title)

    Hi there! This story was…refreshing, but I really think you wasted a lot of potential. I’ll explain later, for now, the nitpicks. Oh, but first, In your title, the ‘The’ ...

    Dec 12, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Crux - Edited

    Thanks so much for the reviews, guys! I'll work hard to make this better. :D @born2be: He 'walked among them' because they didn't know he was a thief. He was ...

    Dec 12, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Report A Site Bug

    I don't know if we've stopped using the Poetry/Short Story Databases now or what the deal is with that but I tried to get to several different Emily Dickinson poems ...

    Dec 10, 2010
  • Randomosity Re: Wait for it!

    I have a bad feeling about posting here, like it's gonna be some sort of lame joke on me. Some play with the words "wait for it" maybe. :?

    Dec 10, 2010
  • Randomosity Re: You Know You're a Nerd When...

    You know you're a nerd when you play Final Fantasy 6...the SNES Japanese. >

    Dec 10, 2010
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Existence of God

    Has anyone thought beyond God? As a Christian, I believe there is nothing 'beyond God', but I've always entertained interesting theories and ideas of beings or entities above or beyond ...

    Dec 10, 2010
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rename The User Above You

    Hobbes :D

    Dec 10, 2010
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Ban the User Above You [6]

    Banned for having a Christmassed avvie

    Dec 10, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Bear Prince

    Hmm, the chin juts, and the Prince's thumb is in the wrong position, but other than that it's okay. What program did you use to create this? Photoshop? Gimp? ;)

    Dec 10, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Two Roads Diverge

    Hey, Drawers, nice story, but you should have credited the original writer of that poem, or else it could be seen as plagiarism. You know, just a little "~Robert Frost" ...

    Dec 10, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Crux - Edited

    The light from the moving torches –their high flames undaunted by the stinging rain– threw long and hideous shadows over the men. The colour of the skins, the rippled muscles ...

    Dec 10, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: Magnified by Jash Bagabaldo *tweaked*

    Well done, Jashy! I really liked it! Like, *like* liked it. :D I didn’t get the chance to listen to it, so my review may be a little scattered. Hope ...

    Dec 10, 2010
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Corrupt a Wish 2

    Granted, but it turns out to be the wrong sort of courage. I wish I knew what to do with this sticky relationship.

    Dec 8, 2010


Well, if I can't get this chapter to work....at least I will have exercised my fingers.
— Kaia