Jenthura

Lumi - Yeah, I've been thinking of that, but I get a lot of fun out of doing them, so maybe I shouldn't. Speaking of which, I haven't forgotten Mal. ...

Excellently explained, but you have not yet expounded the mysteries of complex sentences, nor compound-complex, nor compound-compound, nor...:D

MathisSiddel - Sure, how large do you want it? In other words, do you want it webpage-banner-sized, or do you have specific specifications? pointe2drama - You're welcome! I enjoyed working ...

Alright! She jumped a little at the sound of his voice. After she had recovered from her surprise she replied , This part does not have an effective voice. Try ...

They were all very good photos, the river one being the best, but I noticed that they all seemed to lack a subject. Each one of these pictures shows beautiful ...

First of all, it was very hard to read. Not only did you bold and italicize and center it, you jammed it all together into a scary block of text! ...

Hmm, it's obvious you're more used to doing poetry than short stories; this piece's prose is very flowery! I like the style of it, but in some place it can ...

(Pundit, how is that fortunate? :P) Unfortunately, Death didn't like the taste of your life. Go get a new real one.

Dragontte - I finished the color version too! And here's a better scan of the lineart. Ultraviolet - Well, okay. I was going to shut JART down temporarily while I ...

Dragonette - I finished yours! I stayed up until 11 PM last night working on it and woke up 5 AM this morning to work on it some more. I ...

Fortunately, while waiting for death, a passing phoenix gives you the secret to renewable life.

Banned because I spent a half-minute trying to recognize the flag in your avvie. (It's French, right?)

Granted, but you only think you're awesome. I wish I could pause time at will.

:lol: Thanks B2! Oolala Because I just discovered that you were French the other day.

Excellent! I love the idea behind this, and the ominous note it ends with. I noticed a few errors (I queased as she snapped the creature[']s neck) but you could ...