Jenthura

:lol: I like this a lot! I must admit that I feel Schadenfreude towards the poor loser. Anyways, you start off with an 'And' which is never a good thing ...

Hey, roostangarar, let me point out the few problem areas I found. "Look guys", said I, "We've got a distinct lack of any facial movement or even verbal response. What ...

Hey, Snoink! I love the little girl’s voice throughout all these chapters! You’ve done an awesome job. Anyways, I found a few problems with this chapter. One was what B2 ...

Hi, Confictura. Despite the fact that you’re working with a very clichéd idea, you managed to get some original ideas. However, you made a few mistakes. Let me point them ...

Um, Camu, I don't own this SB, so I really wasn't giving the go-ahead. I was just sorta making a suggestion that sounded more like a command. Sorry, ultraviolet!

Seriously, Azila? You wanted me to review this? Look at all the other ones above! There's nothing left!! Sorry to seem lazy, but I don't think I could mention even ...

Banned for changing your avvie. Seriously, I liked the other one more.

Spazzish, anime-loving, forgetful. XD Um...Asian?

Evilcarrotbunny

Unfortunately, Bob the turnip farmer hits you over the head with a wrench.

Granted, but it costs you an arm and a leg. I wish for more time!

Alright, let's start!

Jenthura: Can that even be called a hula hoop? It's... big! If you look closely, it's actually a length of pipe tied at the ends.

Hey, Dcmc, I found this very interesting and, like Elinor, I love sci-fi! I had a little trouble when reading the first paragraph, however. In it, you speak of many ...

I ditto Razcoon! This is smawesome!